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may be it is the best thing of the day that able to make me smile! well it is the comment from my eng teacher, Mariejoy.. about my english assignment..i'm quite happy about it too.. here the story: and here is her comment:
“Painting Music”
She rotates the dimming light with heavy hearted, walked towards the giant piano, pulled out the bench and sat down cautiously. The silence amplified her devastation. After getting herself compose, she took in a saddening, brief breathe and hovered both of her hands above the black and white key board. As her long, slender fingers settled down to key board, they automatically brushed them endlessly and releasing the sorrow that was deep within her. The bone-chilling wind from the window blew softly against her black dress. Her black, silky long hair flowed with the breeze as helplessly as a willow against the wind. However, she was too depressed to sense the coldness in the wind. Her delicate and feeble feature felt so weak even against the lightest wind. Under a small pool of yellowish-orange light, she looked so elegant in front of the cherry wooden piano. It was the song “The End of the World” that she was playing. Her heart ached as she recalled the times that she spent with him. Then she forced out her small voice to catch up with the melody of the song: “…why the sun does goes on shinning, why the stars shines above. Don’t they know, it’s the end of the world because you don’t love me anymore…” She sang it with her heart and soul as many shattered memories came to her mind. Why does he have to leave me? Are we not suitable? The words that he said drained away her feelings and from that moment on it kept orbiting in her mind over and over again: “I think we are not meant to be. I’m sorry…. but I think we should stop seeing each other.” Without herself noticing, her beautiful big, round eyes were shimmering with tears. Her voice trailed away as the excruciating pain suffocated her and blurred her senses.
This is so beautiful. You have a gift for language. You just need to clarify a couple of points that I have pointed out. I also like the way you weaved the lyrics of the song into your story.
i feel as if i never feel so happy before in my life.. been upset quite a while.. :(
i'm not sure what i was hearing is correct... yea but my mum seems really solemn and i know by heart that it is for real... i'm not sure how am i going to face my grandma the next day i see her..well i would try to pretend that i know nothing as she doesn't know as well.. may be it is better not to know..
i was planning to...do so many things tmr but then ..after hearing the news.. i don't know where to begin..
today... i don't know why but i feel somewhat sad.. sigh
tmr and thursday..i'm going to be sort of busy..tmr night i have to go to look after my grandma at the hospital... when i came home from my chinese class today, i feel kind of empty without seeing my grandma..
and left only 5 days to school reopen.. i don't know but i just don't feel like going to school.. -_-i'm going to be really busy! oh yea..and i've got to buy presents for carol and elaine..
not sure why... but i feel that wei hao is a bit weird these days.. i wonder what is wrong with him
i have read the horoscope that send to my mail box every day.. today it says "motivation comes from within" ....i don't know but i feel that the horoscope is quite true.. hehe
today wei hao's mother is going back to Tai wan..and i'm planning to go along to send her as well..
the other time.. my mum and i went to fitness and happened that my mum and his mum met and had a chat.. i just feel kind of weird..like.. parent meet parent ..that kind of feelings.. i don't know but feel really.. nervous..then we four went to have dinner together.. his mum and my mum seems to get along really well.. i really wonder if the day of my dad and my mum and both of his parents would meet and have a meal together would ever happen or not?
well the other was having a bit of mood swing.. not very certain of the reason as well....sometimes i feel that i treat him bad without any good reason.. he did call and talk.. but at that time i was really tired.. after talking for while i told him i didn't want to talk anymore..but later i was using msn and chatting ..and he asked me what i'm doing..and i told him..and later he call again..and i was kind of ignored him.. -_- i'm seem like a baf guy..
the other day, on the 12/9 i had to go to school to do the registration for the next term..was really nervous whether i would or not get the class that i want.. luckily, i got all three classes that i wanted for core course..but the other one..english.. i got advanced oral which is same as ec3...and i did badly for it.. +_= but later at the end of the day.. there's someone drop linguistic...and so wei hao helped me to drop advanced oral to take linguistic..i'm quite touched about that as he didn't want advanced oral as well but he actually help me out first.. then he waited for vacancy of linguistic and he followed me into the section ...but don't really know what linguistic is..actually wanted creative writing... well overall.. i have all of my classes with wei hao :) , he's really good to me...
hmm..some bad news..my granmother's health seem to getting worse.. she felt her hand numb and couldn't really move them well.. today my mum bring her to see doctor..i hope she's alright
it is a shocking discovery to find out that my pet hamster had fled away...i tried to find him and looked around every where but he was no where to be seen.. i'm really upset ... Brownies was gone.. and i just had this feeling that he's not around hiding in the house.. i don't know but i just know it.. but still i put some food in the house to see if he would come out to eat at night or something..but the food left untouched..
but i'm still waiting.. and hoping wth faint hope that he would come back..
now is left only my Ham Ham... :(
today i went for chinese class... today seem to be a long day.. but the passage is really interesting..and very touching i almost sob when i read it..it is about this astronaut who was going to crash in the rocket..and he had left with only 2 hours.. he is so thoughtful.. like.. he was concerning about his wife's future..
i don't know if it is because of the melody of the music or the lost of Brownies or the content of the passage ..but i just feel bad altogether...
good news.. : i got A for sumemr which is quite unexpected , well i wonder if it is because the teacher pity on me or is it because wei hao sort of taught me briefly on how to answer question.. anyway .. A
2) i had sign up for fitness.. quite good also.. moreover wei hao is a member as well
3) a bit free now.. can do whatever i want
bad new : 1) time is running out.. tmr i got to go for chinese class..
2) university is starting soon.. +_+
3) wei hao goes to beijing with his family..for 5 days
Living in a wonderful world..
~ Her Favorites ~ice-cream..cookies and cream.. almond banana
~ Loves ~music..
~ Loathes ~..hmm...
~ Wishlist ~to be rich...hehe
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